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Our Anonymous Photographer has not been quite as successful as planned with this image. Exposure is dark and dull and the fence post on the right of the image is very distracting. It is neither wholly in the photo, or better still, wholly out! However, the subject matter is interesting and the grass field creates an interesting horizon line that cuts the building off part way up its facade.

 

So, what do we do? Let's look at the compositional elements within the frame first. If this is the desired angle and focal length, then we need to get rid of that fence post and the easiest way would have been to walk a step or two forwards. We'll use Photoshop to see how it might have looked...

 

 

This is much simpler, but we can also make a stronger composition just by cropping out the fence and slightly reposltioning the building within the frame.

 

 

Next, lighten up the foreground and darken down the sky and the photograph is starting to come together a little better.

 

 

There's lots more we could do to add interest to the foreground grass and get the building to stand out a little more strongly, but at least now there is a stronger composition to work with.

 

Our e-book on How To Win Photo Competitions isn't just for making better competition entries, it's full of great advice on improving all your photos - you can find it here.

 

And if you're interested in a photography tour/workshop in the next 12 months, I have trips going to Bhutan, New Zealand, Norway (Polar Bears) and Antarctica. Full details on the Better Photography website!

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Our Anonymous Photographer has introduced us to a bleak winter scene. The tree is well-positioned with the road creating a compositional line that leads the viewer into the photograph. It's a beautiful, classic design and the tonalities have been well controlled. However (there's always a 'however'), there are a few distractions around the edges of the frame that take away from the composition's simplicity.

 

Look what happens if we clean up the left edges (using the healing brush quickly and roughly in Photoshop):

 

 

To my eye, this is a lot simpler and cleaner. What about the grass on the right side - should this be removed as well?

 

 

Hmmm. Some viewers might think this is now a little too simple, a little too plain, but we can't really keep the grass where it is because it is so close to the edge of the frame. We could return to the scene and photograph it again with a bit more space to the right, or we could engage Mr Photoshop and move it a little to the left, just to see how it could work:

 

 

That's better! Our aim as photographers is to practice this type of 'seeing' in camera, or at least when shooting the photo, plan to simplify it during post-production. Retaining the grass but moving it to a position of balance keeps the photo's simplicity and now there is a reason for the eye to travel along the road, between the grass and the tree.

 

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And if you're interested in a photography tour/workshop in the next 12 months, I have trips going to Bhutan, New Zealand, Norway (Polar Bears) and Antarctica. Full details on the Better Photography website!

 

Are there any tricks to winning a photography competition? I wish I knew. Rather than aiming for the top prize, I think a better approach should be to have your photograph in the top 20 percent of entries. Why? Because most judges will agree about the bottom 80 percent, but the top 20 percent is up for grabs.

 

The top 20 percent always has the winning images, but which individual image wins can vary on the day. I have had entries of mine score first place in one award and not even be accepted in another, but that is the exception. I usually find that if an image is in the top 20 percent in one competition, it will be in the top twenty percent in most. And once you're into the top 20 percent, then you have a chance of taking out a prize.

 

Photography competitions aren't like a running race because there is an element of subjectivity about the result.

If your photos are special, you have a chance and, to an extent, that is exactly what entering a photography competition is - a chance. You have no control over what the judges like, their opinion about certain subjects or techniques, or what other photographers are entering. All you can do is produce your best work, work that you are personally proud of, and put it up. You have to be in it to win it.

 

Then, sit back and hope the judges take a fancy to your imagery. If nothing else, it is the best learning and growing experience available in photography.

 

The 2017 Better Photography Magazine Photo of the Year Award is now on! Late entries close TODAY 21 August and first prize is a cool $5000 cash. Gold, Silver and Bronze Awards will be handed out and every entry will receive a short comment or suggestion from the judging panel. For more information, visit www.betterphotographyphotocomp.com.

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